ext_185099 ([identity profile] ladylovelace.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] delorita 2010-03-15 03:17 pm (UTC)

(How did I miss this being posted? I am a dork)

I love how much feeling there is in this. This bit especially:

The forbidden dreams about you, kissing me, doing things to me no one ever has.

I wanted to wash it away with lots of alcohol, drown it with cocaine and morphine.


Does odd things to me. In a good way.

Also I like that it is written in short little bits because I have the attention span of a gnat and this is exactly how I wish everything was written.

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