a Sirius drabble to let him return

[delorita]

I thought it is somewhat uplifting, but the first people who read it were thinking it is sad. I think it's a matter of POV.

Sirius belongs to JKR and I am just playing with him, I am also making no money out of this.

I don’t want to die.
I want to live!
I want to live for my godson, Harry.
I want to live for my only surviving friend, Remus.
I don’t want to float through eternity!
I want to live to fight back against my cruel cousin, Bellatrix and her master.
They can NOT defeat us.
I’m focusing on turning around before it’s too late.
Concentrating.
Willing my hidden wand to start working again.
Time is running.
But Harry’s screams in the back of my head give me energy.
The energy I need to go BACK through that veil.
Back to life!

Comments

[stormcloud.livejournal.com]

Oh I love it! *Sniff* You saved him at the end!! If only JK would have done the same. I love it though, very good insight into Sirius' mind!

[delorita.livejournal.com]

Thanks to you Lucky too!! Well I liked the idea that he, a very talented wirzard as well, would be able to free himself from there. After all, Bellatrix' hex didn't really hit him, didn't it ;)

[delorita.livejournal.com]

thank you very much Lucky!!! I am glad that you see that he is winning the struggle and comes out again!! Well, I think, no one knows what Harry REALLY is going to do with the resurection stone ;)

[siriusslash.livejournal.com]

See, this is how it should have went with Sirius coming back through the veil. I like Arthur but at the same time I really think that JKR's reprieve should have went to Sirius and should have read exactly like you wrote it.

Very well written words!! :)

[delorita.livejournal.com]

Thank you Gina!!!! Glad you see the positive attitude in it as well!! I watched it again (in pain) and saw that he didn't have his wand, so I made it "hidden" ;)

But what has it got to do with Arthur? Arthur Weasley?

[vampire-rogue.livejournal.com]

Ahh, Deeeeeeeeeeeelllll, I liked that. :D
It's always curious what Siri is thinking as he struggles to get back through the veil... wait... that didn't actually happen? Well.... to hell with that.

I'm glad it's Harry who gives Siri the strength to go back through the veil. :D I'm a slasher like that.

[delorita.livejournal.com]

THANKS MISSY for telling me you liked that!!! For me, it DID happen :D:D:D

I am reading "time again"!!! You write such a COOL YOUNG Sirius!!!! I love the way Harry and him act! As well as James! I am at chapter 10, catching up :D:D:D The attraction between the two is sooooooo well written :D:D:D:D And all the time I am wondering what has happened with Ron...

[vampire-rogue.livejournal.com]

OH MY GOD! *SQUEAAAAAAALLL!!!* *jumps up and down like a fangirl* You're reading TA? And you like it? YES YES YES!!! Is it wrong that I'm partially in love with my own young!Sirius? Cuz I sort of am...

I'm glad you love Siri and Harry's interaction... I'm always so worried that I'm going to turn them into girls.

Urghea, I hate Ron. But I do have to cover that by the end of the story....

by the way, totally blushing at the praise...