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This was written for the October Challenge at Pepe's place. So some of you might have seen it before, sorry about that.

Pairing: J/D
Rating: none
Warning: A little disgusting maybe but Nicci wanted to be scared. It’s not scary though IMO.

Notes: One of Rosenrot’s manips has been my inspiration again. When I opened it I was like WOAHHHHH and the little plotbunny jumped me. Isn’t it just angsty as hell?



Daniel’s POV


"Jack." No reaction.

"JACK!" I say somewhat louder, stepping closer to the tub.

"What?" Jack's looking very startled back at me.

"Are you ok? You've been in here for over an hour."

"I wasn't." Jack's sitting up slowly, shivering. All the bubbles that must have been in there are gone. I put my hand in the water and it's cold as I expected.

"Were." I help him up because he seems to be beside himself. He’s clutching his stomach tightly.

“Toilet!”

I half drag him over there just in time for him to throw up mercilessly.

My belly is revolting too but luckily I can control it. I’m stroking his back, not knowing what else to do to make it easier for him.

After a while he’s sitting back on his heels, reaching for the toilet paper to wipe himself clean.

I take him in my arms, holding him. He’s leaning heavily against me, not able to control silent sobs. I’m not asking what’s going on. He’s been going through too much lately and I know what nightmares are like. I bet he did fall asleep in the tub and one of them caught him.

“God, Daniel.” He only whispers.

Date: 2007-01-14 04:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tularia.livejournal.com
Awww.. *pets them both*

Date: 2007-01-15 09:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delorita.livejournal.com
Tuuuuuu!!! thanks for reading!!!

I got your little surprise in a snail mail!! I wanted to email you but didn't find your address *shame on me*. That card is SO cute with the odd looking Danny LOL THANK YOU for it!!! I think the name of your town is very interesting ;)

Date: 2007-01-15 01:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tularia.livejournal.com
YAY! I'm glad it got there, and very happy you liked it! :-)
I think it was named after a Civil War General, but I can't be too certain. Most towns around here have something to do with a war. LOL

*HUGS*

Date: 2007-01-15 02:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] willwallaby.livejournal.com
Awww...Del, this little drabble of yours just screams full fic. There way too little J/D hurt/comfort. Okay, a lot of hurt but not enough comfort.

Encore, Del, encore. Need a followup!

Date: 2007-01-15 09:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delorita.livejournal.com
awwwww WILL!! Thanks for reading!!! I know it needs more comfort.....but writing takes sooooooo long...and psst...I AM in a S9/10 mood lately.....so my JD muse is a bit lost *blush*. Did YOU get any chance to finish something lately??

Oh and Cimmie would like to know, if you ever got the stuff she made for you. Maybe you could PLEASE email her about that?

thank you very very much!!!!!!

Date: 2007-01-15 06:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] msbeata.livejournal.com
Oh poor Jack!

Warm him up, Daniel, warm him up.

Date: 2007-01-15 09:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delorita.livejournal.com
Don't be afraid, dear! Daniel WILL warm him up!!

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