JD drabble

[delorita]

This is written for a challenge. I haven't written for JD in an eternity and am really proud that the sweet plotbunny hit me so fast. I may also drag all my JD stuff from Area52 into my LJ but am not sure yet.

Story Title: Daniel's First Time – Not What You Think
Author's name: Delorita
Rating: PG 13
Pairing: Jack and Daniel
Spoilers: none
Disclaimer: The guys are not mine, I'm just playing with them and don't make any
money out of it.
Warnings: Jack's First Person POV
Notes: thanks to Annie for the very fast beta
Word Count: 100



"Um, Jack..." Daniel"s bending his head slightly, looking at me over the rim of
his glasses.

"Daniel?" I try not to turn to him, concentrating on my fishing rod.

"This… this is… nice."

My head snaps in his direction. Did he just say fishing is nice?

"What?" I ask, sounding somewhat stupid on purpose.

"Nice." He grins, studying his own fishing line out in my pond.

I chuckle and hold out my hand. He entwines his fingers with mine in a tight
grip.

The first time sex with him was mind blowing – and so is this.

I sigh contentedly.

F I N

Comments

[candygram-5000.livejournal.com]

OMG, so much memories *sigh contently*.

[delorita.livejournal.com]

It's like we are set back in time. Isn't it?

contently or contentedly? lolol My beta said the second...*frowning now*

[candygram-5000.livejournal.com]

Wait wait, dictionary is my best buddy.... Slurps my fingers to turn virtual pages...
You know what? I'm disgusted. My Internet dictionary doesn't know any of the two words *check head*.
Erase both, put "very happily" instead and there you have exactly what I was meaning!!
I know I shouldn't answered my mail at work like that, without my own tools. It is usually bad enough like that lol!!

And now I have dirty wet fingerprints on my screen from my slurping... Bah...

[delorita.livejournal.com]

lol you know what? I had it the same way as you had but my beta didn't like it that way ;) My LEO dictionary actually KNOWS it! At last the translation into German...lets see if it knows French as well...ohhhh hehe this almost sounds like english. It says "content" or "satisfait". hhmmm no surprise here that my son knows both languages almost equally good already *giggle*

Sorry about the language babbling but I just like it so much ;)

[immertreu.livejournal.com]

Awww, cute! Too bad we never really saw them fishing. Just the two of them, I mean. ;)

[delorita.livejournal.com]

Thanks! Well, Daniel bringing Jack a beer was good enough for me even with Sam around ;) There is always fiction ;)