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delorita ([personal profile] delorita) wrote2010-01-19 11:54 am

JD drabble

This is written for a challenge. I haven't written for JD in an eternity and am really proud that the sweet plotbunny hit me so fast. I may also drag all my JD stuff from Area52 into my LJ but am not sure yet.

Story Title: Daniel's First Time – Not What You Think
Author's name: Delorita
Rating: PG 13
Pairing: Jack and Daniel
Spoilers: none
Disclaimer: The guys are not mine, I'm just playing with them and don't make any
money out of it.
Warnings: Jack's First Person POV
Notes: thanks to Annie for the very fast beta
Word Count: 100



"Um, Jack..." Daniel"s bending his head slightly, looking at me over the rim of
his glasses.

"Daniel?" I try not to turn to him, concentrating on my fishing rod.

"This… this is… nice."

My head snaps in his direction. Did he just say fishing is nice?

"What?" I ask, sounding somewhat stupid on purpose.

"Nice." He grins, studying his own fishing line out in my pond.

I chuckle and hold out my hand. He entwines his fingers with mine in a tight
grip.

The first time sex with him was mind blowing – and so is this.

I sigh contentedly.

F I N

[identity profile] delorita.livejournal.com 2010-01-19 08:18 pm (UTC)(link)
lol you know what? I had it the same way as you had but my beta didn't like it that way ;) My LEO dictionary actually KNOWS it! At last the translation into German...lets see if it knows French as well...ohhhh hehe this almost sounds like english. It says "content" or "satisfait". hhmmm no surprise here that my son knows both languages almost equally good already *giggle*

Sorry about the language babbling but I just like it so much ;)